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Entry tags:bechdel test, fic post, sg-1

Stargate Fic: Uncommon Threads
...Which brings us to "Emancipation," an episode which had no right to fail the Bechdel Test and failed anyway--Sam and Nya do speak to each other repeatedly, but only about Nya's father and the boy Nya wants to marry. (And there are several other levels and layers of fail here where gender and race intersect and then my head explodes, so--moving on.)

I could have had Sam have some other conversation with Nya, although I'm honestly not sure about what. Instead, I wrote about Sam having a conversation she logically must have had with the woman she logically must have had it with, because I for one do not believe that Sam said nothing when presented with, and helped into, that infamous blue dress.
ETA: Now with Nya's name right, thanks [info]nandamai!





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Moughal's wife leads Sam away to change clothes, and reveals her face at the end of the episode, but never speaks and is never named.

Gen. Sam. During "Emancipation."
1,073 words. PG. Beta thanks to [info]iuliamentis
In which Sam Carter takes off her clothes.


Uncommon Threads

She told Sam her name was Abuez. Sam just smiled and nodded and shrugged reluctantly out of her tac vest.

She thought no more of it than she did of anyone else's name; it was only later, after everything, that Daniel remarked idly that he'd never caught the name of Moughal's wife. Sam supplied it, and Daniel actually stumbled. She'd asked him what was wrong, what it meant, and then he'd told her: Abuez, mother of Abu. Once a woman had a son she was identified in no other way. Sam remembered the other women she'd met among the Shavadai, counted up how many names had ended in -ez, and realized that taking the veils off their faces wasn't even the half of it.

But she didn't know any of that on the first day. She just laid her tac vest down warily beside her MP5 and her sidearm and utility knife, unbuttoning her fatigue shirt while Abuez opened a trunk and carefully, lovingly, unfolded a series of ridiculously silky, shiny, lacy, and embroidered garments. Sam seriously hoped she was supposed to be choosing among them and not wearing all of them; it was warm here, and that looked like a smothering weight of clothes.

Sam shrugged out of her overshirt and knelt to untie her boots, and Abuez came over and knelt beside her.

"This is very fine," Abuez said, running her fingers over the sturdy fatigue shirt with bizarre delicacy. "So even! Such perfect stitches, such tiny threads. Did you make this?"

"Uh," Sam said. She'd never really thought about where uniforms got made. They came from quartermasters, that was all. God, she hoped they weren’t made in sweatshops. They couldn't be, right? Surely the Air Force bought union?

"No," Sam said. "It was given to me, for my work."

Abuez looked a little disappointed, but not especially surprised. "The color is so even, too--and not just on this garment, but all four of you. Your clothes match so perfectly; that is a master dyer's work. Tell me, do you know where this color comes from? We have nothing that matches it."

Sam shook her head. Industrial dye lots probably wouldn't mean anything to Abuez, and even then Sam's knowledge of the chemistry involved was pretty sketchy. Olive drab, for God's sake--who got excited about olive drab? It was unobtrusive, that was the whole point of it. "I... no, I'm sorry. I don't know."

Abuez gave Sam another smile, this one almost pitying, and said, "Well, you must tell the woman who made this that it is very fine work. I will put your clothes away safely, so they will not be wrinkled when it is time for you to go home."

"Thank you," Sam said, because she couldn't think of another thing to say.

Abuez laid out Sam's shirt and folded it perfectly in the time it took Sam to get her boots off. Abuez laid it gently, reverently, into the chest.

"I think this will do for you," she said, picking up and shaking out a white nightgown sort of thing--an underdress, Sam supposed.

Well, if they were starting there, she probably wouldn't have to fight to defend her own underwear. Small mercy.

"You're very tall," Abuez said, frowning a little as she held up the embroidered white gown. Sam couldn't tell whether her tone was disapproving or not, and then reminded herself that she didn't care what anyone here thought of her. Even if they were loaning her clothes to keep her from being stoned to death. Especially if.

"We spent a whole moon on this, last winter," Abuez said, and now her voice was stern--proud, and warning. Sam forced her attention to the gown, and took in all the tiny stitches. They'd all been done by hand, after the cloth had been dyed--after it had been woven--after the thread had been spun--after the fibers had been harvested...

"A month?" Sam glanced at her hands to be sure they were clean before she touched the garment. It belonged in a museum, or some boutique Sam would never dare venture into.

"A month for the embroidery." There was a note of satisfaction in Abuez' voice, and Sam wasn't sure whether it was for the work done, or the fact that Sam was finally understanding the magnitude of it. "My sisters and I did this, for my oldest niece. She's nearly as tall as you--this is her festival dress."

"Oh," Sam said helplessly. Of course these were someone's clothes, someone's best clothes, put away safely; people who lived in tents didn't just have extra clothes lying around in a range of sizes. "Thank your niece for me? And your sisters. And. Thank you."

Abuez gave Sam a smile then, definitely approving. "I was happy to do it. I have no daughter of my own to make things for--sons are sons, but they do not appreciate finery the way a woman does."

Sam remembered, suddenly, the last time her mom had taken her shopping--they'd gone without Mark, and her father had been away, as ever. They'd sorted through racks and racks of dresses, and Sam had rolled her eyes and protested when her mother followed her into the dressing room to do up zippers and argue about hemlines. She hadn't thought about that day in years--she'd lived in jeans, and then in fatigues, for so long. The excitement of dress-shopping with her mother seemed as foreign as another world, in retrospect.

"I know what you--" Sam managed, and then stopped short, her throat closing on the words. She could remember the smell of the mall, the bright lights of the dressing room, her mother's hands pulling her hair back--she'd worn it long, back then. She remembered her mother, helping her get all dressed up, and she couldn't speak.

Abuez gave her a searching look, and then touched her cheek gently.

"It is not so long since I lost my own mother," she said. "Don't worry. We'll look after you."

Sam didn't want to be looked after, and she didn’t want to go back to picking out dresses or having them picked out for her, and she didn't want sympathy from a woman who wasn't allowed to speak in public. But she put her hand over Abuez's hand on her cheek and whispered, "Thank you," and she meant it.




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[info]giglet
2009-04-15 07:04 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful.

This reminds me of "A Jury of Her Peers".

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 02:57 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

I had somehow not read "A Jury of Her Peers" until I went and googled it to find out what I was reminding you of, so thank you also for that assist with my education. :)

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[info]cat_77
2009-04-15 07:10 pm UTC (link)
Lovely adding of depth to something that was brushed over on the show. Wonderful read.

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 02:58 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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[info]nandamai
2009-04-15 07:18 pm UTC (link)
Excellent, as ever in this series. I love the idea that Abuez opened Sam's mind a little bit, too.

(The young woman's name is Nya, though -- Lya is the Nox. :) And I found it interesting, when I looked that up to double-check, that for an actress who looks far too white to be the child of those two parents, she has an Asian-sounding surname, Lo.)

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:04 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! And thanks for the spelling help--I have clearly been thinking ahead too much. *g*

(Here is the profoundly troubling thing: her surname seems to actually be Lowe. The only time she's ever been credited using the 'Lo' spelling is in this episode, where she's playing the astoundingly white-looking daughter of two obviously Asian-descended characters.)

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[info]fairyglass
2009-04-15 07:37 pm UTC (link)
This was a beautiful scene. Full of so much the episode just glossed over.

Thank you for the writing of it. :)

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:05 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

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[info]elainasaunt
2009-04-15 08:20 pm UTC (link)
I really don't know this show at all, but I'm following your series with great interest, just because it's so well written and the characters so well done.

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:06 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I am surprised but delighted that these stories are at all meaningful out of context.

I, uh, cannot unreservedly recommend the first season--and especially not the early part of the first season--as Bechdel fail was accompanied by Good Writing Fail a lot of the time, but it's a fun show and I'm very fond of it. :)

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[info]browngirl
2009-04-15 09:14 pm UTC (link)
Oh, you are killing me most wonderfully. *clutches heart*

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:08 pm UTC (link)
*beams*

Let me know if you start to experience any discomfort, hm? I wouldn't want to be killing you in a bad way...

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[info]katcorvi
2009-04-15 11:12 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that's so very touching. Excellent story.

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:08 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]princessofg
2009-04-15 11:56 pm UTC (link)
okay, i'm sitting here crying. thank you so much for writing this. i love what you've done with the material in this episode, which is very problematic for me.

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Meep!

*shares lovely industrial-and-disposable Kleenex*

Thank you! I considered skipping the episode--but I needed the data, and I knew there would be lots of fixing to do. I'm glad this worked for you.

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[info]scifithinker
2009-04-16 04:18 am UTC (link)
An excellent beat to add to the story.

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]missmollyetc
2009-04-16 04:58 am UTC (link)
::sniffles:: Dude, stop making me tear up after work!

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:11 pm UTC (link)
*shares Kleenex*

Sorry! At least I'm not making you tear up AT work?

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[info]normaltrouble
2009-04-16 05:24 am UTC (link)
This is such a wonderful series.

I am not very good at reviewing, it seems, but I really like how you found a way for these women to be so honest, and Sam and the woman do really connect.

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:11 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I often struggle with writing feedback myself--thank you for yours!

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[info]ticketsonmyself
2009-04-16 01:30 pm UTC (link)
this episode had yards of gender and race fail; this story is so good... the best yet in your series. my favorite parts:

Daniel actually stumbled. She'd asked him what was wrong, what it meant, and then he'd told her: Abuez, mother of Abu. Once a woman had a son she was identified in no other way. Sam remembered the other women she'd met among the Shavadai, counted up how many names had ended in -ez, and realized that taking the veils off their faces wasn't even the half of it.

God, she hoped they weren’t made in sweatshops. They couldn't be, right? Surely the Air Force bought union?

Abuez gave Sam another smile, this one almost pitying, and said, "Well, you must tell the woman who made this that it is very fine work. I will put your clothes away safely, so they will not be wrinkled when it is time for you to go home."

"Thank you," Sam said, because she couldn't think of another thing to say.

"A month?" Sam glanced at her hands to be sure they were clean before she touched the garment. It belonged in a museum, or some boutique Sam would never dare venture into.

"A month for the embroidery." There was a note of satisfaction in Abuez' voice, and Sam wasn't sure whether it was for the work done, or the fact that Sam was finally understanding the magnitude of it.

Sam didn't want to be looked after, and she didn’t want to go back to picking out dresses or having them picked out for her, and she didn't want sympathy from a woman who wasn't allowed to speak in public. But she put her hand over Abuez's hand on her cheek and whispered, "Thank you," and she meant it.

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-16 03:12 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad this worked so well for you.

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[info]fanficfan
2009-04-16 11:31 pm UTC (link)
Very nice, adding the embroidered detail (woman-made, woman-centric) that the show as I recall it lacked.

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-17 02:16 am UTC (link)
Thank you! In the episode Sam makes a dismissive mention of embroidery and I felt a bit Yeah, clearly you have never attempted hand-sewing, so that was half my motivation with this one. *g*

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[info]harborshore
2009-04-17 07:01 am UTC (link)
Oh lovely, lovely.

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-17 12:33 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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beautiful
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2009-04-17 05:29 pm UTC (link)
I found this on a recommendation at Gateworld. Beautiful story.

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Re: beautiful
[info]dsudis
2009-04-17 05:38 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2009-04-21 10:24 am UTC (link)
Lovely- and so nice to see a story where the *incredible amount of time and skill* that it takes to make things by hand is recognized. The grinding level of work that the Shavadai would have to do just to survive- and yet they still do fancy embroidery. (Also- nice fanwank for how they happen to have a dress that will fit Sam!)

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-21 02:09 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I've done juuuust enough handsewing to object when Sam makes dismissive reference to the embroidery on her dress, and that was half of what I wanted to fix here. :)

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[info]grav_ity
2009-04-21 02:54 pm UTC (link)
This is on my list of episodes I don't re-watch. It infuriates me. Because things like this should have happened all the time. But they made it into a joke, and that makes me mad. I've sat behind my friends in Arabic tents and waited while they drank tea and talked. Worse, I've been bundled off into the kitchen BY MYSELF to be surrounded by The Women while The Men talk. I've pretended to be married so they'd let us share a hotel room. My friend Colin was offered 10 camels for me. I've had shopkeepers COMPLETELY ignore me and only take money from The Guy...and I did it all politely, because I was a visitor, but it makes me angry when it's a joke on TV, you know?

Ahem.

I really liked this fic. :)

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-22 12:08 am UTC (link)
I nearly didn't rewatch it, but I'm doing demographic statistics for the show, so I needed the DATA. And then had to write this to make myself feel better afterward. I'm glad this story worked for you, thank you!

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[info]lokei
2009-04-21 04:27 pm UTC (link)
Really enjoying these. This episode probably will bother me more now that I've been reading your series, but that's probably a good thing. *wry grin*

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-22 12:09 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Doing the counting project and writing fixits is definitely making it harder for me to watch shows that are really bad at this stuff. (Oh Supernatural, why you gotta be like that?)

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[info]aelfgyfu_mead
2009-04-23 09:53 pm UTC (link)
It's nice to see you make something good of the episode! I hated, hated, hated this episode. Now I have a reason not to regret watching it!

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[info]dsudis
2009-04-24 02:51 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad this story worked so well for you! :)

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[info]sg_fignewton
2009-04-29 02:56 pm UTC (link)
I've just had the pleasure of reccing this! I love this series of yours and I'm looking forward to more of it. :)

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[info]dsudis
2009-05-01 12:48 am UTC (link)
Thank you, and thank you for the rec! I am looking forward to writing more. :)

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[info]rigel_7
2009-04-29 03:16 pm UTC (link)
This was lovely!

I really enjoyed the glimpse into the world here, especially that insight about the utterly mundane attitude Sam had towards her own clothing.

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[info]dsudis
2009-05-01 12:48 am UTC (link)
Thank you, I'm glad this worked for you!

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[info]calcitrix
2009-04-29 03:21 pm UTC (link)
Here because of the above rec...thank you! This was the first episode that I ever saw on TV and it kept me from watching the show for a couple of years before I finally gave it a second chance. This was a great ficlet and I shall now mosey along and read more of them.

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[info]dsudis
2009-05-01 12:50 am UTC (link)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this! (And, man, I am sorry you had that as a first episode--it reminds me of when I was a big fan of The X-Files, I met an astonishing number of people who first saw this one horrifying episode with incest-mutant-infanticide and, needless to say, did not come back for more. Um. So at least it wasn't that, I guess. That's a lot harder to write fixits for. *g*)

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